This time my project for G.T. was to create a visual poem. A visual poem is a way of writing poetry but using imagery that relates to what is going on with your poem to show the reader/watcher of your visual poem what is kind of going on. My poem was about "Moments". Moments when you read a book, what kind of emotions that you feel when reading. What do you feel when you finish a book? Sad? Angry? Relief? Many emotions that you can feel.
The special effects that I added I think helped with the mood a lot. Like the music and filters that I added into my poem. Also the music helped a lot because it kind of related to what I was talking about. If I did not add effects and music I think that it would be very dull and boring.
I am satisfied with the results. This was the first time that I have ever done something like this, so it was very fun to experience something new. I think that I could have added more effects. I also could have gotten more b-roll and clips. I am glad that we got this assignment, it was really fun. Also I could have gotten my voice over done better and clearer.
I am satisfied with the results. This was the first time that I have ever done something like this, so it was very fun to experience something new. I think that I could have added more effects. I also could have gotten more b-roll and clips. I am glad that we got this assignment, it was really fun. Also I could have gotten my voice over done better and clearer.
Great poem.
ReplyDeleteRepeated shots.
Good backround music.
I like your background music because it fits in. You could of spoken more slower so we could understand you. But other than that great job Aedan!
ReplyDeleteThat was amazing! Your poem was extremely well written. I thought that some of your B-Roll could have been a bit more applicable. Great rhyme scheme, and overall your poem was really awesome.
ReplyDeleteThe shots of the book were nice. You paused in the middle of the voiceover. But besides that the voiceover was great.
ReplyDeleteI like how it went smoothly.
ReplyDeleteYou should probably slow down because you were talking a little to fast.
Pretty good all together.
Great emotion shown. I think you should've read your poem slower because it seemed like it went to fast and you were rushing. Your b-roll was great and nice sequencing.
ReplyDeleteYour voiceover was clear and understandable. You could've edited out the part where you paused. B-roll matched what you were saying.
ReplyDeleteI liked that I saw what you said. Some B-roll I dont get. Really clear voice over.
ReplyDeleteYour audio was loud and easy to understand you
ReplyDeleteYou read very fast, and the B-role was very shaky and not focused.
b-role was attached to the poem very well
Hihi Aedan! Awesome work with your visual poem. I really liked your visuals because it was always clear and just a tad blurry.
ReplyDeleteI think you could spoke a bit slower because you spoke a little bit too fast. It didn't give us time to think about your poem a little bit more.
I also really liked how loud and clear your voice was because it was always consistent with your video.
I like the beginning how you made the book you were reading so magical. Slow down when your speaking and put a little emotion into it. I love it as a whole, purely amazing!
ReplyDeleteGreat job Aedan! The emotions of the students in the B-Roll was excellent!
ReplyDeleteEither it was me, but it seems there were some repeats in B-Roll, like when a student was laughing.
But it's an awesome poem! It was read very clearly! Nice Job!
(THE GIVER!!!!)
I liked how your voiceover was very clear and understandable.
ReplyDeleteThere was a repeated shot of Leila.
I also liked how what you were saying matched your b-roll and pictures.
Your poem had a great deal of emotion
ReplyDeleteYou spoke a little fast for comfort
The B-Roll you had was ver clever. YAY AEDAN
Your visuals matched your poem. You could've slowed down your voiceover. I liked the emotion that you showed.
ReplyDeleteCompliment: Great Audio and B-Roll
ReplyDeleteImprovements: maybe improve some shots by
Compliment: Awesome sound volumes
Hai, Aedan! Nice poem, I really liked how I could relate to what you said (
ReplyDeleteThough it's kind of biased because I love to read). One thing you could improve is to make your shots more steady. And another thing I liked was how you used actual books (Ugh, e-readers).
The poem has a good feel to it.
ReplyDeleteYou were a bit fast in saying the poem.
The poem was clear and was neither too loud or too soft.
The way you read your poem was clear and I could understand it easily. 2nd rate actors though, you could've done better :P. Great emotion in your voice!
ReplyDeleteI really liked the poem, it was extremely relatable.
ReplyDeleteThe shots with Leila are kind of repetitive.
I liked the wide shot of the town, very well thought out.
I liked the B-roll.
ReplyDeleteCould have had more b-roll.
Good emotion.
1.) I really liked the effect you had on the clip of you opening a little box; it added a great feel to it.
ReplyDelete2.) I think you could have included other footage from just book pages.
3.) You did a great job, I liked how you shared your feelings toward books!
I liked how you showed expression in your visual poem. I think that you could've spoke more clearly in the beginning. But I liked all of your b-roll.
ReplyDeleteIt was a really great poem overall. Though I saw some shots that were repeated. Most of your shots and music matched really well.
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